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Ive been dancing along the edge
Of falling apart
Here I stand
About to break
Help me, save me
Someone please
No one can hear me
Falling
Breaking
Shattered I am
They see the broken doll on the floor
They sweep up the melancholy shards
And throw me away
After all
No one wants
A broken thing
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something i wrote a lil while ago...too lazy to put it up till now...drew this when i was bored...

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:iconakai-karasu:
mh~...I like this style...
and here we go again with the doll-thing...it is great^^

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Please grant me my small wish
And love me to the marrow of my bones
(Dir en grey- The fatal believer)
:iconlittle-reisuke:
yeah...way back when you had written yr doll poem i had written this...just too lazy to put it up til now! and thank you im glad someone likes it!

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:frail: i would like to be a butterfly...because nobody suspects the butterfly :frail:
:iconakai-karasu:
I'm actually even thinking about drawing something in connection with this...I'm kinda hyper-creative the last days XD

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Please grant me my small wish
And love me to the marrow of my bones
(Dir en grey- The fatal believer)
:iconlittle-reisuke:
DO IT! go for it chika!

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:frail: i would like to be a butterfly...because nobody suspects the butterfly :frail:
:iconakai-karasu:
Xd I'll try...I got 2 weeks of holidays now so I'll probably come up with something

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Please grant me my small wish
And love me to the marrow of my bones
(Dir en grey- The fatal believer)
:iconlittle-reisuke:
yayz! i look foreward to it!!!

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:frail: i would like to be a butterfly...because nobody suspects the butterfly :frail:
:iconcruciblle:
Very beautyfull! Dark and sorrowfull and just the way I often feel! perhaps you could check out some of my poetry when I upload it this weekend?
:iconlittle-reisuke:
alright...tell me when you get it posted!

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:frail: i would like to be a butterfly...because nobody suspects the butterfly :frail:
:iconcruciblle:
I will be sure to. By the way, do you have a myspace? If you do can I have your URL (myspace address) so I can add you to my friends. You seem lik a pretty cool chick.

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