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the art of hurting-for akai by ~little-reisuke:iconlittle-reisuke:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


endlessly screaming
all night in my dreams
nightmares haunting
throughout the day
trapped in this daymare
lost in my pain
all day
endless night
bleeding bloodlessly
screaming without sound
love me
youre killing me
but im already dead
the dieing dead
were dieing anyway
flight
it hurts so much
over and over and over and over without end
the day and the night
meaningless
in this world of hurting
blindly drivin foreward
futile
the end
the light at the end of the tunnel
is a cliff
goodbye
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think of my lovely akai-karasu as i write this...

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*Akai-karasu Aug 17, 2007, 7:46:10 AM
wow....
dear, I'm overwhelmed...
this is just how I feel by now...
and...I love this poem!
you're wonderfull
*cuddle*

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Please grant me my small wish
And love me to the marrow of my bones
(Dir en grey- The fatal believer)
:iconlittle-reisuke:
~little-reisuke Aug 17, 2007, 1:04:54 PM
i was thinking of you as i wrote it!

p.s. i love the die pic!

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:frail: i would like to be a butterfly...because nobody suspects the butterfly :frail:
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*Akai-karasu Aug 18, 2007, 1:31:28 AM
this makes me feel special somehow ^^°

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Please grant me my small wish
And love me to the marrow of my bones
(Dir en grey- The fatal believer)
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!Kanta777 Mar 12, 2008, 10:12:41 AM
1-2 word style?
its pretty good!=D
wow!
:iconlittle-reisuke:
~little-reisuke Mar 18, 2008, 6:53:28 PM
it would be except for two lines had more than for words in them!

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:frail: i would like to be a butterfly...because nobody suspects the butterfly :frail:
:iconkanta777:
!Kanta777 Mar 19, 2008, 9:43:17 AM
o well its still good though!=D
:iconlittle-reisuke:
~little-reisuke Mar 20, 2008, 11:51:08 AM
thats what i thought!

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:frail: i would like to be a butterfly...because nobody suspects the butterfly :frail:
:iconlittle-reisuke:
~little-reisuke Mar 20, 2008, 11:51:37 AM
you are very special to me...

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:frail: i would like to be a butterfly...because nobody suspects the butterfly :frail:
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