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she brings death swifter than the sword at her side
her eyes as sharp, her love as bloody
the red maiden in all her splendor
wolves and great cats follow in her wake
to ensure her will is carried out
so i lay down and wait for death
she greets me with a smile on her lips
and murder in her eyes
the angel of my destruction...
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...i've been listening to too much avenged sevenflod lately...i gotta go back to dir en grey!

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:iconakai-karasu:
it sounds really good...I like the picture it creates in my mind...

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Please grant me my small wish
And love me to the marrow of my bones
(Dir en grey- The fatal believer)
:iconlittle-reisuke:
*bows* thank you! im really proud of some parts of it, its a little different from most of my other works and i really like that!

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:frail: i would like to be a butterfly...because nobody suspects the butterfly :frail:
:iconenchantressofnight:
o___o

<333

I love the imagery in this ... it's so descriptive..

amazing poem!
:iconlittle-reisuke:
thankies! i was listening to avenged sevenflod and got inspired!

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:frail: i would like to be a butterfly...because nobody suspects the butterfly :frail:
:iconkatsuya666:
red maiden? for all i know you could be talking about me!

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As I always say, if it walks like a duck, and acts like a duck, shoot it.
-Hugh Laurie
:iconlittle-reisuke:
i was indicating blood...NOT red hair...i pictured her with black hair!

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:frail: i would like to be a butterfly...because nobody suspects the butterfly :frail:
:iconkatsuya666:
clarify next time. Us redheads have to put up with so much, just the other day i went to see a movie and the murder in it TARGETED REDHEADS! Such a shame.

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As I always say, if it walks like a duck, and acts like a duck, shoot it.
-Hugh Laurie
:iconkanta777:
its really good!
blood?
mmmm...im thirsty
:iconlittle-reisuke:
...creepy!

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:frail: i would like to be a butterfly...because nobody suspects the butterfly :frail:

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